The sun came screaming through the partially dressed window
it’s veiling not adequate to keep away the morning
I lay at your side and feel as if I am falling . . .
My heart begs me to reach out and touch your sleeping face
(maybe your love is transcribed in braille)
but I resist . . . realizing the truth as the light fractures the fantasy
though we are together we are constantly slipping farther and farther apart
Author notes
=] screaming face constantly falling realize
Quote:
"We are falling
a/p/a/r/t
but you can't see that
you are blind"
- POISONDAGGERS
A contest entry
- FALLING APART by Temptation..
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i like this... but it reads more like a story then a poem. maybe im just not use to the style... and i dont judge on that so dont worry about it effecting your chances. its the words that matter =]
i am going through something like this right now. so i can relate. and i have mornings like this all the time. =[ i hope this isnt personal because it honestly sucks (sorry cant think of any other way to say it.)
but thanks for entering and good luck. -
Poem:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4295157
Pic:
http://cisya.deviantart.com/art/mess-19324166
Title:
.Flaws.
Quote:
"We are falling
a/p/a/r/t
but you can't see that
you are blind"
- POISONDAGGERS
WordBank:
screaming
face
constantly
falling
realize
good luck!!!
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