Sometimes days go by so fast
Its like we don’t speak the same language any more
You sit right beside me
Still I miss you so much
Our time together passes faster and faster
I wish I could show you how sorry I am
For neglecting you
Just how much I truly love you so
But there is no time
This is yet another moment I sit here with out you
And I say I care with words you will never hear
As they drip from my finger tips onto the keyboard
Tears flood my eyes
Your memory has sown its self to my heart
And I see you smile when I close my eyes
Oft I lay awake at night just to imagine you sleeping
How I long to here you breathing next to me
I tell my self someday, someday
I pray for you to still care when that day comes
But there are so many things I wish to tell you
Time has an advantage over me,
Its tick - tocking my life away
And holding me back
From the one thing in my life I am certain of,
You
What do u think?
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Oh, to be in love's prison
and to rust those bars with tears!
Beautiful writing here!
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"you sit right beside me/still I miss you so much" thats my favorite lines. its really pretty and it made ne feel good writing it. Good job.
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oh this is so sweet and so sad. thats all i can really say cause thats all there is too say; this is one of those rare poems that are strait forward but still eloqeunt.
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BEAUTIFUL
THERE SO MUCH PASSION HERE LIL SIS YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL WRITE HERE BUT DON'T LET THE TIME SLEPT AWAY FROM YOU GRAB HOLD OF IT AND MAKE EVERY MONTH, DAY,HOUR MINUTE AND SECOND THE BEST TIME EVER -
Beautiful
As much as I hate to nit-pick, there are a few little typos. For example, "And I say I care with words you will never here" I believe you meant to put "hear". Over all, this poem was beautiful and strong. It really appealed to me personally. I can relate to the over all feeling and tone. It was blended together very well, and was very smooth to read
I really enjoyed this,thanks so much for entering& the best of luck to you.
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wow its great...may i ask who its about?
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awwww, it's beautful, amazing.. I love it.
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I agree with ixtli. This is very sweet and beautiful and I pray that for you time will prevail you and him together. God bless nd keep up the fantastic poetry. I enjoy reading it so much. *hugs*
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a couple words misspelled but that means nothing your poem shows true images and emotions. i can relate to this poem. its a very great write i enjoyed it so much
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This is very sweet and beautifully sad!
Well done with this and I thank you for
sharing it here. Keep up the wonderful
work here Lacy!
Jeremy0826 -
Aw! This is really sweet and beautifully written! Great job. There are some contrasts and they make certain images stand out more. Lovely!
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