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i love everything you do

i thought it would never happen
i thought you didn't know me
i thought you liked someone else
who was thinner and more prettier then i am

you were that guy that i always wanted to be with
i knew who you were
you were the one breaking my friends hearts
now there is something between us
i have that tingly feeling when ever i see you
i cant help to smile when i think about you
the was you hold me and tell me that no matter what your never going to let me get hurt
to forget all the other people and do what makes you Happy

those days in the hallway when we were doing "homework" and just sitting there talking and getting to know each-other
and the first kiss you gave me...
i love how when ever i see you i always get a hug and how you don't let me go until a teacher sees... i like that
i like how you listen to me when i say no to somethings i just hope you know its for the best right now
i love that look you give me just because you know it would make me smile
i love how your always warm and you know that I'm always cold
you know when there is something wrong with me without ever having to say anything

i just love everything you do
you seem to care a lot about how i feel and i hope you like me more then i think

i just didn't know how to put it into words and show on how much i like you
i think this is the best way...

Author notes

the writing our my thoughts about the guy that im most likely dating right now and i could never put it into words to tell him how much he means to me...so its more like thoughts

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  • Zephyr Irida
    February 11

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    AWWWW! Is this who I think its about? Maybe? he he..
    Great Writing! True emotions and full of LOVE!
    Nice Job.


  • alwaysapartofme
    October 17, 2008

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    awwww... i think this person would like this very much. you really put your heart into it. It is absoulutly beautiful! I can not wait to read more!


  • PureRomance
    October 15, 2008
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    This poem is absolutely beautiful and you did an astounding job with this piece. Best wishes to you and this guy. I hope you two work out. This poem is just absolutely beautiful. God bless you always in everything you do and write and keep up the fantastic job. I look forward to reading more from you when I get the chance.