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Origami Heart

My Heart Is Made Of Paper
The Names Of My Lovers
Tagged And Graffittied
Some I've Tried To Erase
Or Just Strikeout

My Paper Heart Remembers Every Crease
Every Fold To Fit Love
Or Ripped Up And Thrown Away

This Paper Heart
I've Managed To Tape Back Together
Still Holds Its Form

A Paper Heart
Recycled To Look
Brand New...


...Free To Give Away



Author notes

This is the first I've been able to write in a long time. I don't think it came out quite like I wanted. (SIGH)But I got it out.

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 10

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    Wow. This was incredible both in its intense emotion and its powerful imagery. Very good.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~