we begin to depart
the moment we arrive
as leaves driven by the wind
we by our passions fly
a gentle breeze
easily inflates
to gale force passion
breaking down all gates
we live in such a turbulent time
passion spent with spendthrift fingers
hoping we are not unwise
that passion spent , will grow and linger
A contest entry
- The Selflessness of Love... Huge Points! Form Poems. by PerVirtuous.
3000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your wonderful entry!
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with bold tenderness your ink does flow!
Wisely written poem to strengthen our hearts and minds
to reach out...past lingering..and into realms of
genuine happiness and peace!
well done!
our hearts are more then plastic cards of instantaneous
relief!
flamesdragoness
WE salute YOU!
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I agree with the last comment
Your write is so true to love in life.
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I agree with the last comment
love you sun!!!!
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