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Love.

you came you left.
another came and left.
this just keeps on going.
But now i have found some one.
I know he loves me.
and i know i love him.
Forever to come.

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  • kel dog
    November 26, 2008
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    dfghjj


  • Joshua DePesa
    November 26, 2008

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    Efficiently written(:

    I love it, It does have a depth to it, that can be seen on first glance. Pretty much Awesome write. Keep it up(:


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 17, 2008
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    Thank You for Entering

    Well this is such a sweet shortly penned poem and I really love how you wrote this poem. its amazing the short few words use can become such a deep beautiful poem. any ways like I have told many other poets its amazing the effect love has upon us all. any ways good work and good luck