you came you left.
another came and left.
this just keeps on going.
But now i have found some one.
I know he loves me.
and i know i love him.
Forever to come.
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Efficiently written(:
I love it, It does have a depth to it, that can be seen on first glance. Pretty much Awesome write. Keep it up(:
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Thank You for Entering
Well this is such a sweet shortly penned poem and I really love how you wrote this poem. its amazing the short few words use can become such a deep beautiful poem. any ways like I have told many other poets its amazing the effect love has upon us all. any ways good work and good luck



