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Winter Trees

trees
leafless
naked trunks
deeply rooted
stand

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Lanturne

Syllables:
1
2
3
4
1

Just for the fun of it. So do not laugh, but think deeeep thoughts.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Love the depth of this write......but, I want you to look at your write carefully ~

     

    The most, (if allowed) commas in a Single Lanturne, would be one......and if you read your Lanturne outloud, you would see you would need at least 3.......so next time, work on your Flow and you gain favor from my gavel......thank you for entering and God bless you ~

     

     

    Bear ~

  • x26ss
    October 15, 2008
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    nice, perfect time of year to read this great little piece. i really enjoyed it!