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Agony

I can't tell whether
the infamous glass is
half empty or half full;

all I know is
you're drowning me
in the depths of

what ifs.

Author notes

Option two.

Sorry my title sucks haha

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    don't worry about the title.. I always have problems coming up with my own. I love your poem .. especially the last 4 lines. I love the imagery within this.. You did an excellent job with the prompt and your poem.

    good luck

    kat