things were once so good
at least for a little while,
our love so strong and real,
then reality came, began to sink in.
this world is messed up,
things go wrong, love ends,
purity has long faded away,
what once was now is long gone.
baby, me and you should escape,
this never ending nightmare.
baby, take me far away...
fly away with me..
Author notes
Option #2-
Use this quote "Fly Away With Me"
A contest entry
- Not sure a title! But come anyway! by Lost in a Dreamstar.
448 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any constructive critisism.
Comments
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you need to read the rules!
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Loved it! Thanks for entering!
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I love the jest of your thought behind this write. When I seen it i went blank save for a prewrite I had some while back...which couldn't be entered. best to you in contest.
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