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" Famous Last Word(Shortened) "






Mind; divided

Heart; suffer






















"Goodbye" love




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Goodbye...............................

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 22, 2008
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    I like the way you've written this, it is most refreshing and interesting. A very powerful concept here, represented by well-chosen and well-placed words. This really leaves an impact on readers. Well done! Thanks so much for entering the contest

    - Sweet Blue Eyes ♥


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 19, 2008

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    short, and i liked it. wow, this is really impactful. keep it up man, and congratz on the HM, much deserved.