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Futility

Wrongly accused;
      a|s|k|e|w
Asphyxia caused by what I cannot say
Extinguishing the core; a bleeding soul

Wrenched from an abode; a stranger in my life
Dementia knocked
You answered

Forward withstanding without compliance
Driven mad with knowledge
S
  P
    I
      N

Out of control; beyond your reach
A haven of immortality
Within my head



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Credit: Madness by rashell on deviantart.com
Prompt: Madness

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  • whitexrose39
    October 16, 2008
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    wow. I truly enjoy this poem. I agree with JinxyCat. Very powerful.


  • Asylaarix
    October 15, 2008

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    I can't begin to explain
    the astonishment
    that is flowing through me now
    you have left me with
    complete and utter amazement
    This was amazingly powerful
    and complex!
    Thank you so much for your entry
    And good luck in the contest

    TT