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love is gone

why did he have to go
why couldnt he just go with the flow
i have restless nights and they hurt
i always seem to be alert
love is gone and im torn
like you had to leave and did it with scorn
wher did the love go why did you leave
you didnt have to make believe
now im torn inside an out
you were all i cared about
love is gone and im torn
wish you would have gone without the scorn

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my man left me and it hurts so badly

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  • WantedxXxMe
    August 12, 2009
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    wow, excellent rhyming!! you are great at it. love this write.. thanks for shareing this


  • lovemedeath
    October 30, 2008

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    wow i love ur poem and u show how guys are so messed up 4 messing with our emotions an not careing!!!


  • tanika
    October 15, 2008
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    i think that he is stupid to leave a girl that can wright poems like that...

    sorry about your bf

    xxoo