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Why?

You don't want to do that.

 

Why not?

 

Because  your no teenager.

 

What does being a teenager have to do with this?

 

Listen only teenagers cut.

  

Says who?

 

Lots of people.

 

Well I don't know lots of people.

 

You use to. 

 

 

Maybe l will just use this blade to shut you up!

 

Go ahead, I would love to see blood squirt everywhere.

 

Shut up!

 

Why so you can't hear the voice that tells you that you are doing wrong?

 

I don't want to hear you, go away!

 

Can't I live here too.

 

       Goes and gets a gun 

 

Maybe I will shoot myself to end your annoying voice.

 

Go ahead I don't care.

 

Get outta here, leave me alone.

 

       Goes to drawer and takes out pills

 

 I will once you do what you are going to do

 

Go away!

 

Go ahead it is the only way to get rid of me.

 

       Opens bottle of pills, opens mouth and dumps them in, takes glass of

         water and drinks and swallows, laying on the bed

 

No one will miss me.

 

No that is true no one will.

 

Shut up and get out of my head

 

         Falls into a deep and dreamless sleep, vomits on the bedspread and all

           over herself, she dies

 

Goodbye

Author notes

I fight with depression and suicidal tendencies every day of my life along with cuttng altough I have not taken it all the way who knows maybe I will one day but thatisn't today



Life sucks and then You Die



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  • Pure Thought silver member
    December 29, 2008
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    Strongly written

    Good luck...in contest.
    Buddy


  • insideinsanity
    December 29, 2008
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    Interesting.

    My first instinct was to consider this as something akin to a written script (teleprompt extempore, lol) but as I read on, it turned into a beautiful piece. The battle is quite distinctly there... And the actual *content*... Wow.

    The writing is quite concise, and well done. Good job, especially relating the inner turmoil.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • DarkWind
    October 16, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    This is amazing, very well done and it describes the inner battle against suicide very well. Well done, I know exactly how this feels so I can relate, please dont die I would hate for this world to silence another intelligent voice.
    Good Luck!
    DW