You ask me how I feel all the time,
and I haven't told you because it's a crime.
I know it's not right, they all told me so,
but I just can't seem to let you go.
It's a feeling I can't explain,
and it's driving me insane.
I love you with all my heart,
and I never want to be apart.
Sometimes I just get so confused,
and what I'm doing to you cannot be excused.
We are not meant to be together, our worlds keep us apart,
but whenever I try to leave, I can never depart.
I'm sorry I'm such a monster,
and this isn’t a relationship you should prefer,
but I can't get you off my mind,
it's like your fate and mine are intertwined.
I should have left, but I'm afraid it's too late,
because I don't think we can separate.
I have tried to go,
but every time I try, it ends in another "hello."
I'm sorry, my dear,
but I'll always be here.
I know you probably don't understand my reasonings,
but I love you for you, not just because your blood sings.
Author notes
QUOTES USED TO INSPIRE FROM TWILIGHT SERIES: (put all together kinda)
1) "I love you, I know it's a poor excuse for what I'm doing to you,
but it's true." - Edward Cullen, from Twilight.
2) "Of course I love you, and there's nothing you can do about it." - Bella Swan (even though the poem is from Edward).
3) "You are exactly my brand of heroin." - Edward Cullen.
4) "La tua cantante." - Means "Singing Blood." Mentioned in New Moon when they were in Italy.
If you don't understand this...shame on you because you haven't read Twilight! Anyone who has read the book would understand this in a heartbeat [[no pun intended]] 
READ TWILIGHT!!! IT WILL CHANGE YOUR LIFE!!!
--Missa
Alice is my favorite!
A contest entry
- EDWARD CULLEN! AND BELLA SWAN!!!!!!!!!!! by Bohemianwriter.
450 points, ended October 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twilight by Maili Knephthan.
650 points, ended October 27, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - More options!! Take a peek to find out :) by Ti Amo Te Quiero.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5 Options for the creative poet (24) by bananasfoster42.
1550 points, ended December 23, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - O.T.S. ( Obsesive Twilight Syndrom ) by SimplyNoodle.
550 points, ended December 31, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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amazing write.
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this is a awesome poem my favorite quote from edward is " i saved your life i don't owe you anything" thats my favorite quote and i agree twilight will change your life and if anybody hasn't read the books you need to they are awesome
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awesome and kinda sad but that might be me
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First off let me say FANTASTIC Twilight referncing in this piece!!! For those of us who have read (and been obsessed with) the novels, you can really see the effort you have gone to to put the emotions (and words...) of the characters into this piece. Having said that, however, when reading this poem it doesn't read like you have had to force things to go into place, because each word and each line has such a natural flow to it.
We are not meant to be together, our worlds keep us apart,
but I can't get you off my mind,
it's like your fate and mine are intertwined.
I should have left, but I'm afraid it's too late,
because I don't think we can separate
these would have to be my favourite lines in this piece, as it really highlights the struggle and the emotion that Edward and Bella feel and go through!
I really enjoyed this piece, although to be honest I thought that maybe it could've had another line or stanza on the end, as I just felt that the last night sort of just stopped it suddenly, and didn't feel like a proper ending, if you know what I mean? but it still sounds brilliant anyway!
Thanks for entering this into my poem and sharing your work!
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I love this poem. I adore how you put in references to twilight in all the right places, wonderful job!
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congradulations on the awards that you won. this is a really great poem. and i love how it is from edwards pov. keep it up.
kaycee
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Twilight Fans Reading List ~
Congrats on the Gold, Silver, Bronze & Two HMs this has won;
What a great write, full rhyme and flow lock this together to make the Twilight Fan smile
Excellent!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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wow i really really lke this poem hun but once again theres no chance for the other within the contest, sighs i guess all of your would be, you may enter this one theres a huge chance you will win gold though
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This was a really great poem! My favorite part was when you said "It's a feeling I can't explain,
and it's driving me insane.
I love you with all my heart,
and I never want to be apart"
Thank you for entering this in my contest, good luck and best wishes
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awesomeness
this was really good!
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WOW! this poem is excellent!!! i love it! and i love the quotes on here too! and yes, twilight is AWESOME! thanks for the entry!
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Great write! I loved it! You interpreted Edward's feelings for Bella so well in this piece.
I haven't read a Twilight based poem yet that had only one part that I like. I love the entire poem. I wouldn't change a thing.
Keep writting.
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Wow Missa, this was an amazing poem. As Valley Girl said, it's a good interpretation of Edward's feelings for Bella. Excellent write!
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A great write about Edward's feelings towards Bella. Congratulations on winning all of the trophies. Thanks for sharing.
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i like this poem alt. it's also kind of abt wht i'm going though in my life
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YOUR DATING A VAMPIRE????????? AWSOME!!!
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i'm not going out with him. i really like him and he broke up with me. there is more to the story but it's complicated.
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Wow i love the edward perspective in this poem. its different.
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Nice!
I loved the way you wrote this….
Love isn’t just a word here and you described it well..
I enjoyed reading this… loved the pattern, the flow was good!
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Hmm cool poem. I love twilight
My only critque is the rhyming seems a bit forced towards the end. Maybe you could try to add the same amount of syllables in the lines? Or do some kind of pattern with the syllables? Just a suggestion. Nice job
Oh and by the way...
TEAM JACOB! xD
Edwards cool too though
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Oh yeah??? WELL EDWARD SPARKLES!!! lol.
thanks
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oh wow this is so cool! i love your choices!
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Very well done You could though use some spell checking I noticed a couple spelling errors and in the 4th stanza the rhyme seemed to be a bit off. Other then that I like it much. Thank you for entering this contest
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YES I DEFANITLEY UNDERSTOOD THAT LOL! ONE OF MY FAV LINES!!!, but wow see im usually a team jacob person but this is unbelieveably adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its soo sweet!!! i still love Jacob more tho! lol
dont worry when im judging i wont hold anything against you! lol THANKS FOR ENTERING AND GOOD LUCK!!!!
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