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Individualistic love

Individualism..
is a candle in the darkest room.

is an apple in a basket of oranges

is a foggy day rainbow

is the voices of an angel

is every single finger print

is pink hair

is green eyes

is rose-like cheeks

is long thin fingers

is pale skin

is unique personality

is the individual love

Author notes

by (the adjectives)Bryan Cullen
(the poem) Alice Vere
i don't know what the author's note is so i'm take the best guess and putting it here! (tee hee)

this poem was made by my BF, Bryan, and i. during math he wrote a list of things he liked about me. (tee hee) and i am putting it in this contest, as a poem, because individualism (and love) is very important to me.

A contest entry

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  • I.am.the.sun.
    January 14
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    i like this kind of poem, its my favorite- repeating but with differences, all towards one unifying point. and the point was good! you've talent, thats for sure.
    makes it even better that you and your boyfriend made it wish i had someone to do the same with!


  • PinkPony
    November 21, 2008

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    Oh, adorable, completely! How really refreshing, like drinking a big icy drink on a hot day.


  • Painted Nails
    October 18, 2008
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    Nice thoughts. Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!
    Sydney


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    good thoughts

    your poetry is as individual asyou sound very uplifting, i love your pretty words they make me think of those pretty sprinkles on cakes and icecream at parties, i love reading your stuff it is so uncomplicated makes me happy inside thanks so very much littlefishone


  • Melodies
    October 18, 2008

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    Oh, my goodness, what a profoundly fine poem this is that you have penned, my poet friend! I love the thoughts and the idea of writing such a poem is inspiring and lovely. Smiling and appreciating your talent!

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