When time goes by in the blink of an eye,
Wonder why and how the loss of you blows my mind.
Regrets take control and i feel like everything was a lie.
Things happened, words used, all because I was in a bind.
I didn't know who I was.
I didn't know what happened to me.
I use to be there for you when nobody else was.
When I try to talk to you all I can do is flee,
from the problems that we caused.
I open my eyes and time seems to slow
I see who I was and who I am now
Is it to late for me to show,,
that I can be me and I can be good.
Don't leave me, please, you mean too much to me
Author notes
This is about a friend not a girlfriend
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is a really cool poem. Sounds like you are pleaing for someone to stay. I really like it. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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I really loved this poem. It feels like there is a lot of emotion in it and I love that
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Hmmm, I think this "friend" loves you. I've been in both seats. Thank you for the entry in my contest!
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this is good, the rhyming in the first four lines seems a little forced, but i like it.
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