witness to disparity
she rages at iniquities
that storm across
this living world
yet with elegance
her portrayals
invest the soul
into these trespasses
shining a light
into the dark corners
finessing each thought
with amazing grace...
...perfect mystic excellence
Author notes
prompt; Polish, 30-40 words
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #11 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 16, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh my, this is quite a poem. So very very pleased to see a shiny trophy here. Well done. Very very well done.
Excellent. Congratulations! ~Pamela 
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thank you very much. Took a couple days but inspiration finally found me LOL.
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Indeed it did! What a pleasure to have read this.
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Don't you just love people who won't stand up for themselve, but well fight to the bitter in for justice of an underdog...nicely done...loved the word choice and deeper meaning...
thank you for entering!
mystic
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