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[ these dreams im dreaming ]

these dreams im dreaming

will never come true

i got nothing

nothining at all

i wish i had wings

so i could fly away

to a place

where i belong

all my motivation is gone

i have nobody

nobody to understand

everyday does by

then the next day comes

its the same routine

its getting old by now

im getting older by the moment

and sicker by the day

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  • The Jigsaw Poet
    October 16, 2008

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    So extremely depressin not wot i need at all lol, but it is a great poem expresses the feelings really well


  • ScissorhandHugs
    October 15, 2008

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    i like the lines 'i wish i had wings
    so i could fly away', this poem is very truthful and shows how we can wait all our lives for a dream to become reality