I am an angel,
deep inside,
A fallen angel,
who has to hide.
My wings are broken,
cant fly away,
My heart is broken,
from trying each day.
I was misled,
to this horrible place.
I was given,
this ugly face.
I don't understand,
What these people are saying.
I can't get the handle,
Of this different feeling.
The dampness that falls,
From these many skies,
Also falls,
From my once blue eyes.
I think I'm invisible,
Like I'm not really.
Nobody sees me,
Or What I feel.
As nothing here,
Is what it seems,
I am often afraid,
To have dreams.
I sit and wait,
For the day to pass,
And hope its long,
The night will last.
A contest entry
- SAD Poetry--- Let Me Have Your Best by Ativan.
900 points, ended November 2, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I really like the last couple of lines. The hope that the night will last. Those last lines are one of the best parts of the poem. I enjoyed reading it. The flow is not to bad either and people frequently mess this style up. Good job.
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this is very sad and mournful. The image of this person crying and explaining this comes into my mind when I read, but in a beautiful way. I loved it, good luck in the contest!
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