Your satin lined vest smiled
spreading helplessly
at my breasts,
pin stripes skewing around womanly curves
not meant for fit.
"Château Latour Pauillac" settled our warm glow,
cufflinks placed
uniform near the night stand
flashing diamond dance within firelight.
Author notes
Prompt: Polish - 30-40 words
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #11 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 16, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOnderful image and feeling here. The party may be over but the night and forever has just begun. Beautifully written and congratulations on the Bronze.
Best to you,
Mouser
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Mouser
Thank you so much for your kind words. It was a great contest. Congrats on the silver fellow poet.
~Pamela 
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Great opening line, Pam.
Love this.
Good luck in the contest.
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Tom
Thank you so much. I did enjoy this one a great deal. Thank you for your kind thoughts and support. I appreciate it so much.
~Pamela 
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How beautiful and warming...lovely imagery and soft sensual words...love the ending...
thank you for entering!
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the honor of bronze in your contest. I am so pleased. Thank you again. Excellent prompt, inspiring contest. ~Pamela
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mmmm...
you had me at: "spreading helplessly
at my breasts," l.o.l. sorry just loved the image you conjured up!
excellent per usual my friend!
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Thank you Richard. Always grateful for your continued support my friend. ~Pamela
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This is beautiful and like the way the poem brings you to the wonderful (my favorite) last line--what an image! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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a great take on the promt good luck in the contest
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Thank you. I am pleased you enjoyed this. ~Pamela
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