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Love

When your heart starts to flutter,
and you’re tongue tied and you stutter.
When you hear the birds a singing,
and the bells start a ringing.

When you stand there for hours,
just looking at the flowers.
When your heart is all aflame,
at the mention of her name.
Then it’s love.

When you lie in the clover,
and you tingle all over.
When your heart beats fast,
every time she walks past.

When your food’s left on the plate,
every time you have a date.
When your heart skips a beat,
every time your lips meet.

Does your pulse start to race,
when you’re in a warm embracea.
When you look into her eyes,
does your temperature rise.
Then it’s love.





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Rhyming poem (central orientation)

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 11, 2008

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    This sounds like loosing your mind and FALLING very hard in love

    I loved your poem !!!

    Dit is pragtig!


  • myrataal silver member
    October 16, 2008
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    Oh yeah?



    Sounds like LOVE to me! Lovely lines of infatuation!
    Wonderful feeling, not so, Poet?

    Good luck in the contest!

    Thank you for reading my work. I truly appreciate it.

    Auf Wiedersehn!
    Myra

    • judmc
      October 17, 2008
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      myrataal

      Vielen Dank fuer die freundliche bewertung meines Gedichtes es freut mich dass es dir gefaehlt, nun ist Deutsch dein liebling sprache oder vieleicht hast du bemerkt dass Ich mitglieder "Anything German" bin
      Best Wishes and Kindest Regards George