Dawn Begins to Break
Mother Earth Will Sprinkle Dew
Sunlight brings Serenity
The heavens bring me you
Beams of Warmth upon us
Through the window Gleam
You softly caress my cheek
As if upon a dream
Your eyes burn deep into me
So loving and so blue
Delicately you read my face
As if it were brand new
My scalp begins to tingle
As you slowly fondle my hair
So tender and so wonderful
You were sent upon a prayer
Your lips as soft as pillows
Enchanting with their vow
To be forever as passionate
As the Heavens would allow
You’re an Extraordinary Man
You put the rest to shame
I can feel my body quiver
At the mention of your name
How did I get so lucky
To deserve your warm embrace
Why did the Heavens grace me
With the comfort of your face
Author notes
Once Upon a Dream
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Wow!
This is a very different poem from the one I just got done reading. I guess it goes to show your range of ability to write your emotions... and perhaps my confusion is mostly on account of never having lived with someone before. I do suppose you could have "good and bad days."
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AMAZING TALENT
You are superb myfriend thi was so beautiful, you are a talented writter my friend one of the best I seen. May your pen write on. Many blessings to you
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Wow!
I'm flattered! That's quit a compliment and I'm sure I'm not quit that deserving..lol. Thank you very much! I love writing so I enjoy how others view it.
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wonderful
Hi i just read your poem great choice of words . so lovely ...I just joined here . -
Absolutely AMAZING!!!
I was reading your post in a forum and I was curious to see if you were a good poet... and judging from this poem you are AMAZING!!! This poem touched me! Every woman deserves a man that can do that to them! I am envious of you right now! lol The rhyming scheme was on point! The flow in general I could feel the words melting into my heart! Exceptionally well done!!!
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♥Lovely!
The sentiments and love seem to erupt from the page in this sweet dedication....your husband sounds like an incredible man with an equally incredible wife!!!
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Amazing
It's really great! I love the flawless, un-forced rhyming and the superb word choices.
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