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2 Amazing Years

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2 wonderful years have passed us by
each day brought us
the eternal beautiful things
of your poetry

Many would congratulate you
for your outstanding achievement
writing for 2 solid years
producing such breathtaking poetry

But not me

For I’ve found the essence
of a very sweet tender soul
within your poetry
containing the rhythm
of your beating heart.

We’re the very lucky ones
who were blessed
with the opportunity
to read your poetic masterpieces.

Each poem came to life
from your very hand
Taking us for a journey
into your amazing world.

You guided us with your creativity
displaying the true essence
of what beauty really is.
More importantly,
where it comes from.

Your heart and your soul,
touched everyone
with a tenderness
few have ever known.

We’ve watched your poetry
Blossom like a rose
Some offered a comment or two
but all of us count ourselves lucky
to have known you these 2 amazing years

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  • angelinus
    November 10, 2008
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    breathtaking as usual..love it


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 7, 2008
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    A very good tribute to a very sweet lady.
    Well done Ed my friend


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    This is a wonderful tribute to Cyn!!!! Perfectly said...she is a beautiful soul that writes beautiful poetry. Pam


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    This is a really gorgeous poem, with OH SO lovely imagery!!! Your kind and thoughtful, special recognition of my two year anniversary really touches my heart. Thank you so much for your beautiful entry, I am honored!!! Wishing the best of luck to you in all you do. Take care!!! Peace Always, Cyn


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    this is a wonderful poem about a special lady, you did an outstanding job here dearest friend.

    Joann


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 16, 2008

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    killer words my friend, i am sure that they person they are for will love every but of it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Your tender heart comes through the lines dedicated to a lovely poetess, who I have had the chance to meet as well. You are very gifted writing such poems. I wish you luck in the contest!


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute to a wonderful poet; written with all the tenderness and care you always do and coming straight from your heart. I hope your entry does well in the contest.

    Love Margaret

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