Bound by possession of untruths,
spewed directly from a being
of misconceptions.
Unrealistic tales have woven my life,
perpetuating the obvious, veiled truths,
portraying a marionette,suspended on lies,
A hypothetical orchestration,for all to partake.
Reflections of an abused soul mystify,
as the purity of water cleanses misconceptions,
loosening bindings that have created my own ideological hell.
Author notes
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Option # 2
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest! Something Different. by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended October 25, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW! This is fabulous. I can see why you won a shiny for it. Amazing work. Absolutely stunning. Well done
Keep it flowing.
Best wishes and much love,
Ylova
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this one blew me away.. you captivated my attention with the first stanza. the imagery throughout your poem is incredible and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. the pain seeps from each line that you've got here.
Fantastic take on both the prompt and your poem
good luck
kat
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that is really good. i love the use oof metaphors and it flows so smoothly. realy get what this poem is saying
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wonderful done! "ideological hell"..wow..great use of metaphors, the abstractions works very well. A great job. Good luck in the contest
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Excellent imagery as well as metaphor within this well written piece.
Good meter and flow!
Well Done!
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