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Lift Up The Angels

Within the might of God exist

in every living soul,

in persecution dwells the beast

creates a painful toll.

 

Within God has placed a truth

guided by His light,

evil can not capture it

flickering in the night.

 

Our voices are a link to God

He hears our every plea,

bow your head in silence

for all souls to be free.

 

To remove the burdens of the world

live in harmony,

bring the darkness into light

so every soul can see.

 

For every child of the earth

that dwells in hellish fire,

be quenched with holy tears,

recieve what they desire.

 

Every prayer that rises

an Angel does appear,

from beneath the hellish fire

when we bow our head in prayer. 

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  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    November 7, 2008
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    Very well written!! Thanks for entering and good luck


  • penman gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. A terrific write. Best of luck in the contest.


  • albymyheart gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    The promise of what faith and prayer can bring, put into a lovely rhyming poem. This flows really well, is easy to read and houses a worthwhile message. Lovely write...alby


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    "...live in harmony..."
    A most important message!

    M-C


  • Providence
    October 16, 2008

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    Powerful words dear poet. We create on so many levels. If we life a life of love and compassion, we can create peace (and heaven) here on Earth.

    Bravo!

    Marianne


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    Excellent message within this well-penned composition and good meter and flow to the unforced, rhyming verse.
    Well Done!


  • FreeTara
    October 15, 2008

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    Powerful, strong and true are these mighty words
    This a fantastically written prayer full of honest and compassion.
    I praise you


  • who iam
    October 15, 2008

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    a powerful prayer

    The message is very true;from a flicker to a flame
    God has planted the embers of love and compassion.
    Prayer is powerful indeed!
    Well done once again my friend.
    Good luck in this contest.

  • goalsv
    October 15, 2008
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    A beautiful prayer! Nuff said! AMEN! AMEN!


  • silentheartbreak
    October 15, 2008

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    Good rhyme and flow, I like the message that you put in this, I'm not religious, but I am open to religion as something that can cause people to do a lot of good. Anything to help the people that need help. Thanks for entering!

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