To see, to feel a long lost kiss,
mental state of tortured bliss.
To know above all else, the angels will percieve
and yet, flatter to decieve.
To cry and feel not tears
but all the reapers fears.
To sing for you; my pleas
ignored, discordant daemons to appease.
To fall in far from the deep
and yet, be submerged in waters keep.
To hear the fallen angels curse, thy unholy name
is called aloud; and i'll be spoiled for the game.
The ghosts are all arisen now, shadow armour
of the mind, legions now to keep me calmer.
Does the Devil have this much to fear,
i'll wrench, and cut my soul; and he may commandeer.
Author notes
wordsmiths666
A contest entry
- Tell me your fears! - Open To Prewrites - Open to all! No options by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain and inner demons by Le Fille Morte.
450 points, ended October 27, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything...Anything At All by Let.Me.Be.Dreaming.
400 points, ended September 19, 114 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 1 - Auditions.. 2 entries and PWs by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
1400 points, ended September 22, 81 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am sorry but I have to remove this from my contest, due to the rhyming. This was a good piece however. Thanks for entering and sorry again.
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I loves it =]
Deserved the trophiesssssssssssssssss
"The ghosts are all arisen now, shadow armour
of the mind, legions now to keep me calmer.
Does the Devil have this much to fear,
i'll wrench, and cut my soul; and he may commandeer."
Beautifully dark
Keep it up
Shelly
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I really like this
I like how it has a rhyming scheme
and how all the words just seem to flow together,
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i really like this one its great.
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This was amazing.
I absolutely loved the rhyme and the meter
amazing imagery also
I think this is my favorite
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youl go far in life rob, and noone can stop you if you keep your head down and do ya homework !!!!!!!!!! brillaint poem, your a master of words and if i had any applause id give you it !!
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thank you so much for putting it back in the contest! It is a dark piece but I love it! You are a very talented writer
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