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Dancing on Air

Lines blurred, colors inverted
I've known this scene before.
No clue where I'm looking from
Or even what I'm looking at.
Sky. Sea. Water. Air.
Where do they end?
Where do they begin?

All my questions have no answers
So I’ll continue to dance upon the air,
Like a fish out of water.

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Option #4
http://d-struktiv.deviantart.com/art/Fata-Morgana-64314298
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Fata Morgana by D-StruktIV

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    interesting take on the prompt. its very thought provoking and I like that in a poem. one that makes the reader think.. You have some very good questions here in your poem.

    You did an excellent job with the prompt and with your poem.

    good luck

    kat