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Guardian

Missing image

Numb eyes gaze upon a gateway
into oblivion.
Bound for all eternity to guard,
depravity from shifting out of place.

Malicious indiscretions feverishly alive,

dancing on knife tipped shoes;
causing irrevocable pain,
a side effect of sinister proportion.

Blood ceasing to flow,
replaced by ice pulsing through veins,
an icicle heart where repugnant abominations
are free to roam.
nauseous odors permeate remaining senses;
as razors draw, lakes of tears from the overseer.

Her feelings and consciousness still in tact,
forced to observe repugnance.
Anesthetized only in flesh,
a torturous exhibition cast unwillingly for a totality of time,
without beginning or end.

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Option # 4
found on Deviantart.com

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  • bluestoneangel
    January 7
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    wow nice!
  • Ylova silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Holy cow! Hahaha. Wow. This was so strong in imagery. I loved your take on the picture. This gave me chills. Hehehe. Perfect. Congrats on the HM

    Much love
    Ylova


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Wow, what an opening! A very strong chill to this, powerful and gritty imagery, my fave kind A fantastic write, love how you saw this awesome pic, congrats on the HM

  • carole21
    October 23, 2008

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    well done for the prompt .. liked "dancing on knife tipped shoes" and "forced to observe repugnance" . . congrats on the HM

  • K a t gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    the imagery through out this poem is quite vivid. Your words brought this pic to life, yes even though she is technically dead.. lol I absolutely love the first stanza.. You did a fantastic job with this prompt..

    good luck
    kat

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