web
glistens
captured sun
reveals nature’s
art
Author notes
Prompt: None
Form: Lanturne
Picture Credit: http://mathadogg.deviantart.com/art/The-Web-64825741
The Lanturne is a five-line verse, shaped like a Japanese lantern, with a syllabic pattern of; one, two, three, four, one
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVII - by Bear by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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Wonderful job! Very lovely wording, great aesthetics! Congrats on the Silver!
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and what a wonderful creature the spider is to create something so beautiful. a lovely read.
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this is a excellent poem.. you made a spiders web actually sound pretty.. never mind the fact that spiders or anything to do with really freak me out..
and I mean bad.. Beautiful poem.. Excellent form
good luck in the contest
kat
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Stunning!!!
This lanturne is exquisite. The imagery is beautiful. Photo and poem are a perfect match. Best of luck. Take care.
Sandy
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This is amazingly beautiful, both in form and content. The photo is a marvelous compliment to the write. Best to you in the contest!
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I can't seem to get amazed by the power in these few words. I love this poem, and hate it 'cause its about the spiders web
But the poem I love! Its beauty in words.
Best of luck in the contest!
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love it
smooth and presents a great image
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Simply adoreable...Presetation and message are superb.......the top 2 entries thus far.....aesthetics are spot-on.....you've done well
Good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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