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My heart has been touched,
Something I said I'd never allow again,
Because it's been burnt so much,
I'm a fraid to let anyone in,

You've helped me step away from my fear,
Helped me learn to except what happens
in life,
But how?

Is it because of your kind voice?
Your extreme love for me?
Or is it because you've had the same,
and understand were I come from?

My heart has been touched,
Something I said I'd never allow again,
Because it's been burnt so much,
I'm a fraid to let anyone in,

As the days go by, I open my heart even
more to you,
Knowing in the back of my mind that this
may lead to me getting burnt again,

My heart has been touched by your
soft gentle hand

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Please help me with a title. This is words to what is going on in my life right now.

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  • honeybrown
    November 8, 2008
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    how about just "Touched". its simple and direct. Decent write


  • fallingangel12
    October 15, 2008
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    WOW

    wow cuz this is a good poem.
    hope you find a good title for this


  • Lillianna
    October 15, 2008
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    Warming

    A very heart warming piece that declares your feelings of love honestly and delicately.

    When i am stuck for a title I usually go with the most significant line in the write, which in this case I feel is 'My Heart Has Been Touched'

    Hope this was of help to you.

    Lillianna