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My World


 
In my world water would be air,
And the noisy birds would be fishes,
And I would be the only queen.
 
Here you could fly in the wind,
Weightless and always beautiful,
None who wished to harm you.
 
In my world I would be more then alive,
I would be one with nature,
In a perfect balance and health.
 
Everyone would be, like gods,
And I would dance with my fishes,
And cuddle them like kitty cats.
 

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Option 4

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  • Alyzeh
    October 21, 2008

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    I'd have to agree with sensual angel! The imagery is great, goes so well with the picture and you really nailed it my friend

    Brilliant take on the prompt!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    this is sounds like the perfect world to me. the imagery that is throughout this piece is vivid and excellent. such a bright and cheerful feeling I had while reading this. sounds like a place I would love to be. my favorite stanza is the third one.

    you did an outstanding job with the prompt

    good luck

    kat