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Don't cry for me

Don’t cry for me
I understand
Though you do not feel my pain
I don’t need your sympathy

Don’t cry for me
Our paths are no longer intertwined
You have moved on from this
And you are truly happy

Don’t cry for me
For I still love you
This love will fill my heart
And prepare me for the next

Don’t cry for me
I cannot stand your tears
I have cried enough
Don’t shed another

Let the crying stop
Don't do it for me
But for you...

Author notes

Well, my name also happens to be Sydney! (yey!) I like the topic and it was fun to write!
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Sydney (DancingWings)

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Comments


  • PerVirtuous
    October 18, 2008
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    Thanks for your wonderful entry.


  • Hikari Lady
    October 15, 2008

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    Oh sweetie, you write amazingly. I never realized this until now, this poem is wonderful. I loved every line just fix that grammer mistake and it'll be awesome and well worth the win of the contest. Best of luck!

    ~Noor


  • AnonymouslyKnown
    October 15, 2008
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    Sydney, good poem. you have a mistake though. "Our paths are not longer intertwined"
    It should be no instead of not.