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To Paint The Ink-red Skies

We paint the skies red
the oceans green
the soil blue
we draw a smile on the sun
and another on the moon,
together they waltz though the crimson sky
...and then i woke up

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To Paint The Ink-red Skies
Light My Candle'
Krick

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  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 16, 2008

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    wow this was good I liked it alot poerful imagery here and I liked the ending, please puit the title as the poem title


  • skies painted red
    October 15, 2008
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    wonderful, sir!