Along with life torches
send enormous heat,
inner combustion, blown
human ravages left behind
over tears of loved ones,
Why's go on forever, stored
in phanamon's mystery
A contest entry
- spontaneous human combustion by PersephoneInWinter.
600 points, ended November 2, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i absolutely love the tone; its dark and mysterious but there is a sense of knowing. and the ending is just genius! great write and good luck in my contest!
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You caught me with that word "mystery" Everyone, I am told, loves a good mystery. Sometimes I guess the answers just don't come Funny that it can occur from inside Interesting
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