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Undying love


you said u have started love me
from  distance a far
circumstances keeps our path
always crossing together
i never have noticed
but one day you didnt keep your  silent
you came and  approach me
you were funny and nice company
i started to have fond in you
time has past and we have fall for each other
only to find out that time for us is running out
i never understood why life is so unfair
but then they say...life is too short
on your last precious day
i wanted to be with you
wanting to be there to hold your hands
to let you know that  i still care
maybe our love isnt meant to be
but hoping one day our path will cross
again after life.....

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  • PerVirtuous
    October 15, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry. Wonderful.