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Blue Skies

blue
skies hang
canopy
over flowers
joy

A contest entry

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Long time since I have seen you ~

     

    Than you for entering......the only problem I see with your Lanturne, is your aesthetics, and as you know, I consider Formed Poetry as Art, as did the Poets for their Masters of old....other than that....lovely job

     

    God bless you!

     

    Bear ~

    • saddie23
      October 15, 2008
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      Thank you

      This is the first Lanturne I have ever done here allpoetry. Hope this fit. Thank you again. Saddie23