foot
tapping
lizard hide
sled bottom shoe
blues.
Author notes
- Lanturne -
The Lanturne is a five-line verse,
shaped like a Japanese lantern,
with a syllabic pattern of;
one, two, three, four, one -
A simple Form which requires one breath -
Syllable count:
1
2
3
4
1
Example:
by Bear
*
red
rainbow
missing parts
stolen by greedy
clouds
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVII - by Bear by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LMAO well HEEEEEEEHAWWW, a great one here.
Best wishes in the contest dear one.
Love
Passions
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great rhythm and form
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Hey Wolf
No CAPS, or Punc.'s, perse' Rules ~
Great action and visionary journey in the dance hall....nice job.....good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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Heard of the blue suede shoes, but yours sound better!Love how it reads. Great words of imagery..The picture enhances but still one sees those shoes without it.Wish you luck in the contest..Partial to aligator purse poem recited by my niece..Now this is a favorite...A wonderful way to start reading today!
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