cup
of wine
concord grapes
and daydreams soothe
soul
of wine
concord grapes
and daydreams soothe
soul
Author notes
lanturne
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVII - by Bear by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
very nice Lanturne . . congrats on the bronze !!

-
Indeed... we love our "new wine" here, too, especially with a slice of onion cake. The season is at a close now and the juice is starting to ferment...


-
Okay
short but sweet..you got your point across with such a voice.. congrats on the bronze.
-
What a beautiful Lanturne! Can't drink wine but I love grape soda too. Such a peaceful and serene feeling overwhelmed me while reading. Congrats on the Bronze well deserved
Theresa


-
Love the wording in this! Lovely thoughts! And your 'form' is perfect!
Congrats on the Bronze!

-
this very poem
does just this
beautiful form and body
congrats

-
Form and poem both wonderful--good luck in the contest!


-
Very nice... soothing and beautiful... Well done and best of luck.
Ken

-
Mmmm.....yes, I was just drinking grape soda last night for the first time in a very long time......gotta stay away from the fermenting of grapes

Soothing....love it

Good luck & God bless you Susie!
Bear ~
1 - 9 of 9








