Taste of the Night

cup
of wine
concord grapes
and daydreams soothe
soul

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lanturne

Poetry Formed XXXVII - by Bear by Arkbear. 400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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carole21
October 23, 2008
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very nice Lanturne . . congrats on the bronze !!
ea
October 20, 2008

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Indeed... we love our "new wine" here, too, especially with a slice of onion cake. The season is at a close now and the juice is starting to ferment...
smiley
October 17, 2008
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Okay
short but sweet..you got your point across with such a voice.. congrats on the bronze.
tawk
October 17, 2008

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What a beautiful Lanturne! Can't drink wine but I love grape soda too. Such a peaceful and serene feeling overwhelmed me while reading. Congrats on the Bronze well deserved Theresa
aboomer
October 17, 2008
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Love the wording in this! Lovely thoughts! And your 'form' is perfect!
Congrats on the Bronze!
sheltered
October 16, 2008
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this very poem
does just this
beautiful form and body
congrats
maggiejamespoet
October 16, 2008
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Form and poem both wonderful--good luck in the contest!
KayJay
October 15, 2008
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Very nice... soothing and beautiful... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
Arkbear
October 15, 2008

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Mmmm.....yes, I was just drinking grape soda last night for the first time in a very long time......gotta stay away from the fermenting of grapes

Soothing....love it

Good luck & God bless you Susie!

Bear ~