One cold night, Angel decided to fly so high,
Everybody never noticed, Angel also cry…
She left me a note in my bed, telling me “Goodbye”.
I will miss her.
Each night when I’m alone, she will sing me a song,
Each mistakes I had, she will reminds me what’s wrong…
Each love that I lost, she will tell me that ”we belong”.
I will miss her.
She’s always there in times of my depression,
She always care, she’s my inspiration,
She always help me and gives me strong motivation…
I will miss her.
I remember how she made me laugh when I’m sad,
Remember how she made me cool when I’m mad,
And stays with me no matter what even if I’m bad…
I will miss her.
I know she is always willing to sacrifice,
And I can see the pain in her eyes
But she will hide it all through her sweet smiles
I will miss her.
She really made me live, laugh, and cry,
She doesn’t want to be lonely, doesn’t want a lie…
But in her note that I have read, Angel wants to die…
I will surely miss her.
Author notes
i wonder if Angels want to die too...
heheh weird...
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A tender, sad entry. Your story is well followed through and only developing the final line in the final stanza works well
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thank you very much for your comment cricketjeff...i do appreciate it a lot. Thanks!
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thanks docbill ...
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Sometimes Angels are people. Good work.
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