Willow bark caress
the early breath of springtime
brings new blossoms forth
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A contest entry
- Haikus by MyDecember.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
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very pretty
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Thank you
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Nice, light feel to it.
Cool write.
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nature...drooooool.
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Keep going girl!!!!!!!! I read it again and I still like it. Just plain nice. Monk
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Beautiful... though my perspective is slightly tainted since I read haikumonk's limmerick about 'you' and 'your' tendency. :)
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i like this
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now this was a good hauki, made me feel all warm and tingley.
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Very Impressive!!!!!!!WoW Stephie! This is the perfect Haiku!
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Oh hey this is really nice. I like the flow. Great job! Keep writing!
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LOL! this is perdyful :)
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hahaha..... 'stupids' are fun but I like this a lot also. The idea of 'willow bark caress' is way cool.... and putting the season in the center with a reference word 'blossoms' in the third line is a nice touch. Keep writing these...... Don
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Nice and refreshing, thanks for the read! :o)
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ehhhh... I'll stick with the 'stupids'
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