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~ fall willows ~

fall
willows
have thousands
of drifting leaves
gone

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prompt: single Lanturne

 

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  • penman gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a powerful write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • sheltered
    October 17, 2008

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    this is sad to me because I hate to see the leaves gone. the trees might be ready for snow but my branches
    will never be ready


  • KayJay
    October 15, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery... Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Thank you for entering....love the Fall Theme......I can see every word as your Season falls* upon us.....good luck & God bless you!

     

    Bear ~


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    October 15, 2008
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    I
    like it
    twenty one
    carole you've done well

    ... Makes me want to read on of course but I believe you've made a lovely, tasty and rich little segment... especially when you consider the small number of words, which have been chosen very well.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Sol


  • Candy6
    October 15, 2008
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    Nice one

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