In chimes design
nutures feathery
light love a flow,
entangled in causual
new and youngester growth
holding values locked tight,
tomorrows way, together
endless laughter and subtle desire
flooded in colory tassles and flowers,
shaping,carving,tuning each other
through hopes,dreams,love's beyond,
unknown reaches are met
over rainbows most intergal parts
are we intermingled in fate,
statued tall in marriage's dream
we stand all so proud together
having no harm in each others way,
climb a mountain in harmony
felt inside and easy task with you,
love, proves to all we can.
Author notes
The loved ones are the integrals part of life...Unknown
A contest entry
- The loved ones... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 29, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is really a mature poetry revealing the insticts of the family and its philosophy around its world..you touched the depth of the prompt and made me smile by the take you posted my friend..just a wonderful poetry by you...thank you so much for entring my contest..well done...
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Very nice
I think that our loved ones are the reason for life. You get to take the love with you when you travel to the next relm (at least that's what i think)The cars and homes and things stay here. Great write, Uncle Shaker
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