tender flesh puckers
in sweet anticipation
as your lips hover
and eyes devour
trembling sensitivities
wrapped in hungry sighs
how well you know my body
that a simple look can burn
into the depths of my soul
branding me with your intentions
to be forever captured
like a moth drawn to the flame
Author notes
Artist credit goes to www.fotoarte.lt
A contest entry
- Sensual Pic. Prompt (Adult) by nevadapoet.
500 points, ended October 23, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
a beautifuly penned piece...nice imagery with powerful language full of emotion. Nicely done.
-
Beautiful
A beautiful write Margaret.
-
-
Thank you Aaron
I always look forward to your comments on my poetry.
Love Margaret
-
-
sigh... beautiful sensuality hun as you always do so well! To have a simple look burn is a deep love indeed!
♥
-
a very 'sexicious' poem good luck x
-
-
Thank you Peter
-
-
I'd say this is quite effective dear, well done and all
the best.
With much love,
mj.
-
-
Thank you Michael
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
