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When I grow up

Missing image
You mock my size
but will never see
the greatest witch
I'll grow up to be

Biding my time
I'll never tell
when that day comes
you're hit with my spell

If you looked in my eyes
my secret you'd know
and give me your candy
before the day I will grow

Author notes

Bewitching-watercolor by Steve Hanks

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    WOnderful take on this prompt! You did prove that looks can be deceiving, and she's already got my heart. That attitude she exhibits, hanging from that top lip...yes...you got it perfectly, thank you!
    Much love and best wishes always,
    jin


    • darlintlc silver member
      November 4, 2008
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      Thanks for the comments and I loved that pic also it was so cute!


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    so sweet

    this is such a sweet and whimsical poem, great for the picture you do such lovely poetry to read to children nice write and good luck in the contest littlefishone


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    aaaw, how cute, my wonderful sister. You've penned an adorable write here to go with an equally adorable picture! Good luck in the contest!

    • darlintlc silver member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thanks for the read and comment Sis! It was kinda short but sweet. Just wanted to get across that looks can be deceiving!Ha!ha!

      Thanks Sis
      darlintlc

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