Listen! Can you sense that impalpable
yet authentic, invisible presence?
Pause! Listen with inner ears
to the intricacies of experience.
Author notes
Paw-writer
Picture credit to Google Images
A contest entry
- 20 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..53rd Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
525 points, ended October 26, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5 Lines or Less...ends in 1 hour!! Give me Your Best!! by Timeless Wisdom.
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Comments
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Very wise and thought provoking. Brief, but powerful. Very good poem.
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Very nice reference to all the little things that make life great, not just the material items we can possess by swiping a plasic card.
I liked this alot.
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Really powerful write about listening to ones inner voice. Thank you for this wonderful entry
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Excellent writing
Very intriguing, perceptive. Instructional, valuable.
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My
the inner ear perhaps hearing the softer sounds of life. an idea to embrace poet.
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What a delightful write this was. The inner ear listening to the beating of the heart and the whispers of the soul. You truly did a fantastic job with this. Not only did the picture prompt tell a story, but you gave me an image besides that said even more about this piece. I congratualte you on this wonderful read.
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Thanks again for your wonderful support. It means a lot to me! Blessings, Patty
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Too bad that these days so few people listen. They just hear and think they are listening. Experience knows without having to say. Example speaks without words.
Before they vote, I hope people were listening. ~ Joyce
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Listen
So much said with so few words.
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Expressed beautifully.
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So your my sister's ap mom, DarkwolfGirl, or now she has it SuicidalWolfGirl, nice write. Very short and masterous upon the photo above it. Like it alot, reminds me of some qoute of da vinci among brillance of first sight on an unquie art. But great memorable quire.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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Expressed Well!
A wonderful take on the prompt.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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a brilliant take on the promt your poem paints an inner wisdom good luck in the contest
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A lovely write..."intricacies of experience"
You've created a great atmosphere to go with the pic prompt.
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WOW
This is very worthy of gold my dear friend. At least in my books it is...
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Thanks so much Janice. Your comments are so appreciated and encouraging. Blessings, Patty
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Nice and elaborate, wonderful thought.
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Thanks much for the kind comment. Blessings, Patty
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Oops...forgot clappy guys!
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Beautiful and profound!
Pam
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Thanks much Pam for the encouraging words. Blessings, Patty
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lovely
with your inner ear, feel instead of think
so beautiful and profound
Gorgeous write my friend...
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Thanks much my dear friend. Your comments mean a lot to me. Blessings, Patty
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