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Just a start, have o go to work

Exhaling this breath it's hard to breath
I just can't seem to accept, I'm ill at ease
I live with regret, buried so deep
I live with resent, that no one can see
The image I reflect, is hard to believe
I try to protect, I find no relief
I don't know who I'm protecting, you or me
I don't know what your expecting, I tried to believe
There isn't much worth respecting, in these times of thieves
There sure is a whole lot worth resenting, and just as much to grieve

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