autumn leaves
from every tree
a crow looms
A contest entry
- Fall into Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is jsut too good to puit into words excellent write 3 clappys
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good one!
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Pertect Haiku!
The images are vivid and I like the way it is a fragment and a prhase either way you read it. What's that called- a pivital line?
Good luck in this contest.
:-) qt
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nice weaving
indeed raised eyebrows at vividness of the second line, and way it's in such declaration, simple for both contexts juxtaposed. I can conjecture artistic abstraction of daydreaming darkening bright season spurts as shadowing lively bird's feathers gathering. it even correlates with cold throw of our voice over such emptying branches for sound effects of chilling sight!
split colors of border and bacground pull into that hue of thought too.
definitely a mode of images,
call me Carolyn -
Good haiku
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Looooove it
I'm in love with this, I love the last line, it somehow captivates me :] -
autumn leaves
from every tree
a crow appears
A lovely haiku of the season, and just like it is here. The ravens are there, and the contrast of their darkness with the bright colors of autumn is very good. Thank you so much!
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