Warm chills dance in spirals
pirouette her satin leaves,
Surrendering to the fall...
Malt tones of nutmeg,,
amber laced in ruby wine.
Inhale seasons turning,
as the old replaces new.
Author notes
Autumn's Breeze
30 to 40 words
Background by Marina thanks hun x
A contest entry
- #1 Prompt by katzeyez.
400 points, ended October 15, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
Really loved this
The imagery is excellent and nice to meet you
Hope you come and visit me..........
I love to click on poems that have images...I am a picture fanatic LOL
Congrats on the Gold Trophy it was definitely worthy of it
Susan~~~
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this is lovely!
definately words worth gold!
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What a beautiful write. short but so discriptive.
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Golden Poem!
Your imagery is wonderful! Great little poem filled with hints of beauty and feeling! Gold quality, for sure! Thanks for sharing!
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Missed too many of your writes- prime example right here. Got so many senses involved- deserving of gold.
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This is such a lovely piece of brevity! Very well spoken, with such depth of imagery and beauty to spare. Lovely write!
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I think it was a very lovable poem with a great warmth to it. It made me think of nature. I enjoyed reading this poem and the way you worded it. This is a beautiful and moving poem, especially when you used just the right words.
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Oh wow sis, this is truly worthy of the golden cup!!! It has wonderful imagery and the background is so pretty.
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Oi, very beautiful. something that is both moving and emotional in many ways.
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This is beautiful, and there's a lot of imagery in just a few words. Congrats on the well deserved gold trophy for this piece.
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Very good!
In your brevity, you have used descriptive words to create strong images.
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Lovely imagery in this sweet piece. Just beautiful! There's so much to write about this time of year. It's a pallet of colors out there! Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks Sis x
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aw julie this a beautiful poem your imagery is wonderful good luck in the contest with your delightful poem my freind Its a beautiful background dont you think
marina
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Thanks you hun x
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dis tale ya tell usin 1 of me favorite words malt lol!
gd 1 RL
cheers for now & gd luck in de contest
abe
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Thank you Abe
Best wishes to you hun
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this is absolutely beautiful Mum. Fall is my fav time of year. I wish it could be like this forever. no winter, blah on summer.. spring is alright. but Fall is the best. Stunning piece that you've written.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Thanks luv ya Mum x
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Oh this is just stunning! I am lost for words! Just anazing!
Thanks you and good luck.
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Thank you Kayz
Julie x
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Such beatiful words, a real sensory delight
Malt tones of nutmeg,
amber laced in ruby wine.
Gorgeous imagery there hun, excellent read! Good luck in your contest
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Thanks hun x
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Congrat on the gold Was well deserved here!
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