Soaring up over
and riding on rainbows.
But they'll all dissolve
into darkness.
A contest entry
- Dark - 13 words by Lady Michaella.
325 points, ended October 19, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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they do indeed dissolve
haha . awesome poem. x
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This is a truly stunning poem. Despite the fact that it contains so few words, you have managed to create an extremely powerful aura of beauty, emotion and a sense of the unknown through your words that really moves me. It seems just like a dream.
Congratulations, this is a truly exquisite piece from one of allpoetry's top poets!
Love and Light 
- Katie
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I love this. I love the contrast with the rainbows and dissolving into darkness. I also love the alliteration. Although this is simple, it catches my eye and defines darkness
Thanks for entering
-RoseDaughter-
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