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Cast it away.

I will eat the flesh
Consume the death
Relinquish this darkness
When all is won.

I will pry open my frigid veins
And bleed the crimson rain
As you sink to your knees before me.

Venom fills my mouth, and I spit it out...
You fucking disgust me.

I bend the clef this time and you really believe me
You really think you see me
Right here
Before you.

I thrash inwardly against the sound of the scraping...
Of nails on soul, and find that I was never whole

A piece that's just been bought and sold
Reused and renewed by all of those...
Who thought they could hold...

But you know what, this anger is jagged
Frustration, self-loathing, inconsiderate
Bound with barbed wire, crystal ribbons, and poisoned lace.

I don't want to be in first place
Just bury me beneath you, and carve your initials in my grave.

I've found my place.

Author notes

If you take this for anything more than my own personal means of having a catharsis for the shit I'm feeling...You're an idiot.

What'd ya think?

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  • pumpykin
    October 15, 2008
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    Wow

    This gave me shivers =O


    • Rogue
      October 16, 2008
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      Why thank you! I haven't written anything that dark in a while. I'm glad you enjoyed it...They were the good kind of shivers, right?

      • pumpykin
        October 17, 2008
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        Lol of course :] And if you're causing a physical reaction in someone just from mere words on a page, you know you've done a fantastic job :]